Feedback Sheets

These are the feedback sheets which we got from the class after presenting our pitch, the positive feedback which we got from this was that the idea of our artist and what represents is good as well as her background and why she is the person she is today, however the class felt we should of presented an image of poppy who is our artist to make it more clear.
One negative from the feedback was that people were unclear entirely on the narrative as we did not show a storyboard or animatics which could of helped with the understanding of the narrative.
After the pitch we realised that we could of presented our mood board as well as the storyboard which would give our audience a better understanding. By getting this feedback it helps us to then go back and develop our pitch to make it even better for the ned time in which we present it.